Can anyone check this text and if there are any mistakes, fix it?

Dear Sirs/Madams. We are retail company based in Germany, selling consumer electronics and home appliances. We are interested in contact with your direct sales department or suppliers of your product in EU.
We hope for long-term and mutually advantageous cooperation, thank you in advance.
Best regards.

Greetings. We are a retail company based in Germany, selling consumer electronics and home Appliances. We are interested in contact with your direct sales department and/or suppliers of your product in EU.
We desire a long-term and mutually advantageous relationship. Thank you in advance.

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One Response to “Can anyone check this text and if there are any mistakes, fix it?”

  1. Sir Al Kazal says:

    Greetings. We are a retail company based in Germany, selling consumer electronics and home appliances. We are interested in contact with your direct sales department and/or suppliers of your product in EU.
    We desire a long-term and mutually advantageous relationship. Thank you in advance.
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